Sunday, 6 March 2011

second draft of front cover


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  1. Mr Smith10 March 2011 at 20:38

    Much better Rhys. The only major issues now is your use of English. Proof read your work.

    To get you started its

    It's 'their' not there.

    Try to avoid using 'We'.

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