Peer Review

Rupert Radley
http://rupertradleylcascw.blogspot.com/


Framing a shot including and excluding elements as appropriate

• Level 3- shots have been framed well and all unnecessary elements have been excluded. 

Using a variety of shot distances as appropriate

• level 3-two different shot types have been used, the shots that are featured on the front cover and the contents page work really well and are appropriate for the task,  a larger amount of shot types would work well.

Shooting material appropriate to the task set.

• level 4- All material that has been used is appropriate for the task and works well with the genre.

Selecting the mise-en-scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting.

• Level 3- colour works well together and three colour palette has been followed in the entire magazine.
• The figures used in the magazine work well, and suit the genre of the magazine.
• The guitar that has been used incorporates well into the magazine.

Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation , including cropping and resizing.

• Level 3-  All pictures have been manipulated and also most of his pictures have been re sized and also the images all have there background taken out with the magic lasso

Accurately using language and register

• Language works well and is in a casual register which matches his genre and target market.

Appropriately integrating illustration and text.

• Level 3-Text and illustration mesh together well but some images stand as a bit out of place.

Showing understanding of conventions of layout and page design.

•  Level 4- good understanding of the conventions of how a magazine is put together,though there is a blank space in between is main picture in his contents page.

Showing awareness of the need for a variety in fonts and sizes.

• level 3-a variety of fonts has been used where appropriate.

Using ICTappropriate for the task

• Level 3- use of ICT is acceptable.